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for my research paper, i think now i have all the materials that i need to have good paper. i almost finish to write my first draft paper. it did take me a while for me to finish the paper because i write a part, edit and revise it before i continue. also i am still checking other people blogs. i mean the ones that i have the same topic to see what they have that really gonna help me to improve my paper and how they proceed to their outline.