entry9

for my research paper, i am doing a revision to give my paper a better shape, i am trying to be specific and avoiding to give too much ideas in one paragraph. i mean i will arrange again my paragraphs. also i am editing my interview since i put in the same sheets so now i have to correct the grammar errors and separate the three interviews each of them should be in separate sheets of paper. also i am still revising my quotation paragraphs and also the work cited which i have to put the link of each reference.

entry 8

for my research paper, i think now i have all the materials that i need to have good paper. i almost finish to write my first draft paper. it did take me a while for me to finish the paper because i write a part, edit and revise it before i continue. also i am still checking other people blogs. i mean the ones that i have the same topic to see what they have that really gonna help me to improve my paper and how they proceed to their outline.

works cited

entry7

for my research paper i already have an introduction and i also finished the interview that i have to do so right now i am starting to work in the first part of my essay. i hope i won't that difficult also i am going to the writing center so they will help to have a good paper. however i am still looking if i can have any other types of source because i still not have something that can make my sources vary.

quotation paragraphs

formal outline

entry 6

formy research i can admit there is having  a progress in it since i have 6 articles but the problem is i dont have various articles. however i start my interview which is going to contain an interview that i will do with my dad, my uncle, my big sister and maybe my aunt because they all have different history. also this can be served as a source so maybe it might one various source i will among the 7. however i am still researching to see if  i can find other type of sources.