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for my research paper, i am doing a revision to give my paper a better shape, i am trying to be specific and avoiding to give too much ideas in one paragraph. i mean i will arrange again my paragraphs. also i am editing my interview since i put in the same sheets so now i have to correct the grammar errors and separate the three interviews each of them should be in separate sheets of paper. also i am still revising my quotation paragraphs and also the work cited which i have to put the link of each reference.