entry 10

i am still doing editing and revising my paper also i am trying to do the extra credit so it will allow me to increase my final grade because i see like i am in the truck and i have not missed any of the entries. for the extra credit i am still looking for the students blogs but i cant even find the ones that have topic of the immigration i don't know what else to do. i also saw a video that was about a senegalese immigrant that was explaining his experience in new york city.

entry9

for my research paper, i am doing a revision to give my paper a better shape, i am trying to be specific and avoiding to give too much ideas in one paragraph. i mean i will arrange again my paragraphs. also i am editing my interview since i put in the same sheets so now i have to correct the grammar errors and separate the three interviews each of them should be in separate sheets of paper. also i am still revising my quotation paragraphs and also the work cited which i have to put the link of each reference.

entry 8

for my research paper, i think now i have all the materials that i need to have good paper. i almost finish to write my first draft paper. it did take me a while for me to finish the paper because i write a part, edit and revise it before i continue. also i am still checking other people blogs. i mean the ones that i have the same topic to see what they have that really gonna help me to improve my paper and how they proceed to their outline.

works cited

entry7

for my research paper i already have an introduction and i also finished the interview that i have to do so right now i am starting to work in the first part of my essay. i hope i won't that difficult also i am going to the writing center so they will help to have a good paper. however i am still looking if i can have any other types of source because i still not have something that can make my sources vary.

quotation paragraphs

formal outline

entry 6

formy research i can admit there is having  a progress in it since i have 6 articles but the problem is i dont have various articles. however i start my interview which is going to contain an interview that i will do with my dad, my uncle, my big sister and maybe my aunt because they all have different history. also this can be served as a source so maybe it might one various source i will among the 7. however i am still researching to see if  i can find other type of sources.

entry5

for my research paper, now i have 6 documents but they are all electronic . i am still searching to see if i will find some other kind of source. also i still not finish with interview that i have to . those interview will be part of my sources. i am also still looking for articles and i want to more than 10 so i will be able to select the 7 strongest one.

annotated bibliography

entry 4

for my research paper, i already  started to collect databases and try to see if i can have some videos or movies so it will help me to make databases varied.

comment about the article

this is sad because it will be a war which the end is not approached yet. the sunnite and shiite war date a long time so i don't any solution that is going to stop it since the more we go and the more other countries involve in it to try to solve it the more it is more critic. i hope a miracle solution will be found so the war will end because it cost lot of lives.

summary of the article of sunni-shiite violence

the article " As Syrians Fight, Sectarian Strife Infects Mideast", written by Tim Arango, Anne Barnard and Duraid Adnan is about the conflict between Shiites in Syria and Sunnites in Iraq and how the sects infects the Mideast. This article also explains who are their allies and how they help them in the conflict and also how the occupancy of Americans in Iraq influence the war.

Here is my research proposal:

entry 3

for my research paper, i already did the research proposal so now i will be put more focus to find solid articles and documents to make paper stronger and to have relevant sources. however also i have some limitations in my topic that forces me to make a little bit general than should of be. insteadof focusing in senegalese immigrant i will make more general and talk about african and latino immigrants.

entry2

right i am really sure that i will do the topic of immigration and i have some documents related to it but   it is general. now i will search documents related to senegalese immigrants.

entry 1

for the research paper, right now i am not hundred percent sure about the topic i am going to use because i am still thinking if i will choose my own topic if not i will go with the immigration topic.