entry 10

i am still doing editing and revising my paper also i am trying to do the extra credit so it will allow me to increase my final grade because i see like i am in the truck and i have not missed any of the entries. for the extra credit i am still looking for the students blogs but i cant even find the ones that have topic of the immigration i don't know what else to do. i also saw a video that was about a senegalese immigrant that was explaining his experience in new york city.

entry9

for my research paper, i am doing a revision to give my paper a better shape, i am trying to be specific and avoiding to give too much ideas in one paragraph. i mean i will arrange again my paragraphs. also i am editing my interview since i put in the same sheets so now i have to correct the grammar errors and separate the three interviews each of them should be in separate sheets of paper. also i am still revising my quotation paragraphs and also the work cited which i have to put the link of each reference.

entry 8

for my research paper, i think now i have all the materials that i need to have good paper. i almost finish to write my first draft paper. it did take me a while for me to finish the paper because i write a part, edit and revise it before i continue. also i am still checking other people blogs. i mean the ones that i have the same topic to see what they have that really gonna help me to improve my paper and how they proceed to their outline.

works cited

entry7

for my research paper i already have an introduction and i also finished the interview that i have to do so right now i am starting to work in the first part of my essay. i hope i won't that difficult also i am going to the writing center so they will help to have a good paper. however i am still looking if i can have any other types of source because i still not have something that can make my sources vary.

quotation paragraphs

formal outline